Notes For Echo Lake 4
I will lobby for this poem the rest of my life. When I first came across it sometime in the late 80s, it, well, changed something in me. It caused me to approach perception differently. So, today, since I’m busy and can’t think of anything to say, I’ll pos it again. It’s the poem of our age. We all exist in its shadow.
Notes for Echo Lake 4
Michael Palmer
Who did he talk to
Did she trust what she saw
Who does the talking
Whose words formed awkward curves
Did the lion finally talk
Did the sleeping lion talk
Did you trust a north window
What made the dog bark
What causes a grey dog to bark
What does the juggler tell us
What does the juggler’s redness tell us
Is she standing in an image
Were they lost in the forest
Were they walking through a forest
Has anything been forgotten
Did you find it in the dark
Is that one of them new atomic-powered wristwatches
Was it called a talking song
Is that an oblong poem
Was poetry the object
Was there once a road here ending at a door
Thus from bridge to bridge we came along
Did the machine seem to talk
Did he read from an empty book
Did the book grow empty in the dark, grey felt hat blowing down the street, arms pumping back and forth, legs slightly bowed
Are there fewer ears than songs
Did he trust a broken window
Did he wake beneath a tree in the recent snow
Whose words formed difficult curves
Have the exaggerations quieted down
The light is lovely on trees which are not large
My logic is all in the melting-pot
My life now is very economical
I can say nothing of my feeling about space
Nothing could be clearer that what you see on this wall
Must we give each one a name
Is it true they all have names
Would it not have been simpler
Would it not have been simpler to begin
Were there ever such buildings
I must remember to mention the trees
I must remember to invent some trees
Who told you these things
Who taught you how to speak
Who taught you not to speak
Whose is the voice that empties
10 Comments:
Such a great poem--it's been so long since I read it. Thank you!
I'm never far away from it. For me, it's the light in the room. It doesn't make the room. It's the light in the room.
It's a big room. Plenty of things are in there. But this is the light in the room.
Reminds me a lot of Ron Silliman!
adam strauss
Don't let Ron Silliman hear you say that!
I've read this poem a few times in the past, but this is the first time that the light came on for me. Thanks for posting.
Louise,
Absolutely. I know what you mean.
O I love this poem. And another like it for me is Underneath (13) by Jorie Graham.
Kazim,
Thanks for that. I haven't thought of that Graham poem in years.
I hear a lot of Laurie Anderson in it now.
Ew. How funny!
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